I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Tuesday, 23 October 2018
kapiti island
Kapiti Island
On Wednesday, we went to Kapiti Island. It was fun. Dad got to the top 10 minutes before me. I took ages! I was so high I could see the North and the South Island from the top of Kapiti.
There were lots of birds. A kaka landed on my shoulder. It wanted my food! It hurt my shoulder really bad when it dug in its claws. Cam loves birds. He was behind me and when I sat down, Cam came up to me and took some photos.
Cliff fell over and his camera came off and went down a big hill and Dad found it.
Cliff was crying. His knees were bleeding because he was going too fast and he tripped. I got lollies, marshmallows and a red skin. I liked it when the boat rocked.It was fun on the boat.
The end.
By Joel
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hi i`m Luka I like your post it is very cool but maybe you could ask cliff if you were allowed to say that.
ReplyDeletewhy did you go to kapiti coast