Monday, 3 September 2018

My I am poem

My I am poem
I am a fox Running
I wonder if I'm 10
I hear a weird sound
I see a dingo
I want a car
I am a fox Running

I Pretend to be asleep
I feel wet
I touch an orange tree
I worry about my cat
I cry about my cat
I am a fox Running

I understand you
I say I like you
I dream of me Driving a car
I try to drive a car
I hope you get an RC car
I'm a fox running
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous23 October 2018 at 12:30

    hi im Charlie from Kaingaroa school in the Far North im also a year 5 and a boy. This is very cool how you've compared your self to a fox. I like you added so much detail about the foxes day.

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  2. Anonymous25 October 2018 at 13:37

    Kia Ora, Joel i'm Lara from Kaingaroa school I am in Tui Whanau I like your self description as Fox my feedback would be to add a reflection or a WALT.

    Is a fox your fav. Animal ?

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